There’s too much space around me
I swing my arms to circles
Dart in any direction
Without obstructions
Without connections
This vacuum of freedom
Is a cage of solitude
I move & move
Devoid of progress
With no right way to go
There’s too much space around me
I love this. Its brought me comfort, nice to read about someone else’s free fall through life. All the space in the world, all the air to breathe and no obvious path or stream to carry you along. Thanks for getting it out there.B
Noice!
I don’t wanna sound like I’m exaggerating here, but this is honestly one of the best poems that I can ever recall reading. Maybe the best I’ve read so far this year. I cried after the first time I read it, and proceeded to read it twice more. YOU MUST POST MORE!
Thank you
Wow, thanks for all of the positive comments guys.
It’s truly refreshing to discover that someone enjoyed this piece. I was very hesitant/insecure about posting it. It’s quite personal to me. You’ve helped me to see that I made the right choice in sharing this.
Thanks again, I will post more soon.