March 1, 2024

There’s Too much Space

There’s too much space around me

I swing my arms to circles

Dart in any direction

Without obstructions

Without connections

This vacuum of freedom

Is a cage of solitude

I move & move

Devoid of progress

With no right way to go

There’s too much space around me

4 Comments on There’s Too much Space

  1. I love this. Its brought me comfort, nice to read about someone else’s free fall through life. All the space in the world, all the air to breathe and no obvious path or stream to carry you along. Thanks for getting it out there.B

  2. I don’t wanna sound like I’m exaggerating here, but this is honestly one of the best poems that I can ever recall reading. Maybe the best I’ve read so far this year. I cried after the first time I read it, and proceeded to read it twice more. YOU MUST POST MORE!
    Thank you

  3. Wow, thanks for all of the positive comments guys.
    It’s truly refreshing to discover that someone enjoyed this piece. I was very hesitant/insecure about posting it. It’s quite personal to me. You’ve helped me to see that I made the right choice in sharing this.
    Thanks again, I will post more soon.

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